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My hands smell
like antiseptic solution
and cancer, because
the peroxide won’t
cleanse your cigarette
ashes from my nails,
and the cremation
jar is still smoking.
Cigarette tar will stain your fingernails.
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haphazardmelody Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
While I was reading this, I really was struck by just how perfect your line breaks are here. That might be an odd comment to leave but...they're seriously perfect.
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SilverInkblot Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you :heart:
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EllewynTheDragon Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
...wow that poem hit me hard.

How can you do so much in so few words?
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SilverInkblot Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Practice :D
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introverted-ghost Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2014   Writer
This is excellent! :la:
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SilverInkblot Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you :)
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brassteeth Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2014
WOW!!!
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SilverInkblot Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!
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RussianTim Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2014  Professional Writer
Those last two lines and the imagery they create are quite powerful. 
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SilverInkblot Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much :heart:
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