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"You forgot to punch air holes."
:noes:

Been a while since I submitted a six word story :D
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sunflowerb Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2011  Student General Artist
This made me giggle. Poor fireflies. :( I'm pretty sure I've done that many times before.
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SilverInkblot Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
I don't get enough firelies to go putting them in jars :( Which is why I'd like to make one of there instead: [link]
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sunflowerb Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2011  Student General Artist
THAT'S SO COOL! I need to make one of those.
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SilverInkblot Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
I KNOW RIGHT? You can also buy them, but it's cheaper to just make your own.
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DNA-The-Authoress Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2011
Awwww! D:
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SilverInkblot Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
:noes:
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DNA-The-Authoress Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2011
How do you make that face? O.o
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SilverInkblot Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
: noes : without the spaces
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DNA-The-Authoress Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2011
Thanks! :D
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morning-tonight Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2011
Yep, that was what they would tell me when I would run around and work so hard to catch the glowing bugs. I still forget sometimes.
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SilverInkblot Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
I haven't caught any in years :noes: We never kept them, so air holes didn't matter.
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ForgedSignatures Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2011  Student Writer
Oh no! I'm really starting to dig these six word stories. This is sad but funny. I hope that's not bad because I love fireflies but I suppose the simple way that you formatted those six words made the speaker appear sort of monotone or as if the fact the the forgetting of punching air holes wasn't too big of a deal more than simple fact. Hopefully that's what you had in mind. Very clever.

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SilverInkblot Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
You can read it either way I think :D Though, were I allowed, I might have added the word "again" to the sentence myself :XD:
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WaxDoll885 Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2011
Sorry to jump in but I added the word again as well, I think it's the way you wrote it. You just kind of absentmindedly add it.
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SilverInkblot Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Well that's interesting :D I'm sending words to your head with magic :iconwooooplz:
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WaxDoll885 Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2011
Or maybe you just found the perfect words. The ones that convey not just what your saying, but what your feeling and thinking. I applaud.
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ForgedSignatures Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2011  Student Writer
I see, that would add more humor I think but I like it as is to be honest!

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Not-a-Great-Artist Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2011  Student Writer
:la: This is one of the best six word stories I've read in awhile! Bravo!
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SilverInkblot Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you :D Thanks for the fave too!
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Plaugh Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2011
Awww. Poor little buggies. :(

Great SWS! :)
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SilverInkblot Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Why look, you used six words :XD: Thank you!
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Plaugh Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2011
Wow! I didn't notice that. :XD:

You are very welcome. :)
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alapip Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
most consequences are unintended - meep meep!

;)pip
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SilverInkblot Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
:D Thanks for the collect!
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alapip Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
:nod:
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Red-banner Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2011
More six-word stories! :la:
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SilverInkblot Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Yep :) I need to get back into them. I've got a few single sentence stories lying around I can shorten :D

Thank for the fave!
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Red-banner Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2011
You're good at them, too. Some six-word-stories can be rather unsavoury.
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SilverInkblot Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Yeah, but some can also be really brilliant :D
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Red-banner Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2011
Exactly. :)
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