"You forgot to punch air holes."
Been a while since I submitted a six word story
This made me giggle. Poor fireflies. I'm pretty sure I've done that many times before.
Yep, that was what they would tell me when I would run around and work so hard to catch the glowing bugs. I still forget sometimes.
Oh no! I'm really starting to dig these six word stories. This is sad but funny. I hope that's not bad because I love fireflies but I suppose the simple way that you formatted those six words made the speaker appear sort of monotone or as if the fact the the forgetting of punching air holes wasn't too big of a deal more than simple fact. Hopefully that's what you had in mind. Very clever.
You can read it either way I think Though, were I allowed, I might have added the word "again" to the sentence myself
Sorry to jump in but I added the word again as well, I think it's the way you wrote it. You just kind of absentmindedly add it.
I see, that would add more humor I think but I like it as is to be honest!
This is one of the best six word stories I've read in awhile! Bravo!
Awww. Poor little buggies.
Why look, you used six words Thank you!
most consequences are unintended - meep meep!
More six-word stories!