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Oxygenation

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Blood
pumps in two
directions – to,
and from, heart
to tiptoe.
The first
breath is sharp
in my diaphragm – the
last, heavy, saturated
in hushed ache,
sated.
You are
the pulse
between my legs,
and the sigh rushing
to the center
for air.
Wanted to rewrite Some Lovers II and ended up writing something new altogether :XD: Tried to build the poem like a cardiac monitor to go with the blood theme and I'm pretty happy with it.
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LionesseRampant's avatar
Ooh this is awesome. Love how it looks like a monitor. :)