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Sunset is early,
a cast-off orange peel
floating on the lake.
Glory-Be-Project Day 126

Now a DLD. With thanks to Concora and TwilightPoetess :heart:

From the suggester: A great example of haiku - subtle and intriguing.</sub>
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DangoLovesYou Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2013  Student Writer
Interesting.

I believe you did a good job of using the haiku format to make an effective poem. The simplicity and brevity do well to illustrate the idea as what it is: A simple, elegant thought. The wording is meaningful and appropriate. You did a great job with this one. 5/5
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SilverInkblot Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Brevity is something of a specialty of mine, so I gravitate towards things like haiku. I'm glad you enjoy them :)
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Sammur-amat Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2013   General Artist
a little late but congratulations on the DLD, dear friend! :huggle:
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SilverInkblot Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you :heart:
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Sammur-amat Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2013   General Artist
Mmhmm :heart:
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alapip Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
DLD - appropriate for an exact
haiku capture.

congratulations!

;)pip
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SilverInkblot Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks! :la:
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rlkirkland Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:)
Congratulations on your DLD! :sun:
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SilverInkblot Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! :D
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DailyLitDeviations Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2013
Your wonderful literary work has been chosen to be featured by =DailyLitDeviations in a news article that can be found here: [link]

Be sure to check out the other artists featured and show your support by :+fav:ing the News Article. Keep writing and keep creating.
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