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Sunset is early,
a cast-off orange peel
floating on the lake.
Glory-Be-Project Day 126

Now a DLD. With thanks to Concora and TwilightPoetess :heart:

From the suggester: A great example of haiku - subtle and intriguing.</sub>
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hopeburnsblue Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2015  Professional Writer
:love:
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SilverInkblot Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
:heart:
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hopeburnsblue Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2015  Professional Writer
All right, speaking of heart emotes, it's time for another round of Guess That Color. :lmao: When I'm not obsessed with blue ... it's green.

:iconheartgreenplz: :iconheartdarkgreenplz: How would you describe these? Is the first one grass green and the second one forest green, or is the first one lime green and the second grass green, or what? :XD:
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SilverInkblot Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
I would call the first a light olive, and the second shamrock.
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hopeburnsblue Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2015  Professional Writer
The first I can relate to. The second, I'm having more trouble conceptualizing. Is there another thing you can create association with, maybe? I'm seeing this kelly-ish green, but I don't think that's probably right, ha.
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SilverInkblot Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Kelly green is pretty close, though a shade darker.
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hopeburnsblue Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2015  Professional Writer
Ooh! Yay! Okay, that helps a lot; thanks!
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DangoLovesYou Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2013  Student Writer
Interesting.

I believe you did a good job of using the haiku format to make an effective poem. The simplicity and brevity do well to illustrate the idea as what it is: A simple, elegant thought. The wording is meaningful and appropriate. You did a great job with this one. 5/5
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SilverInkblot Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Brevity is something of a specialty of mine, so I gravitate towards things like haiku. I'm glad you enjoy them :)
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Sammur-amat Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2013   General Artist
a little late but congratulations on the DLD, dear friend! :huggle:
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SilverInkblot Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you :heart:
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Sammur-amat Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2013   General Artist
Mmhmm :heart:
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alapip Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
DLD - appropriate for an exact
haiku capture.

congratulations!

;)pip
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SilverInkblot Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks! :la:
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rlkirkland Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:)
Congratulations on your DLD! :sun:
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SilverInkblot Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! :D
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DailyLitDeviations Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2013
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Be sure to check out the other artists featured and show your support by :+fav:ing the News Article. Keep writing and keep creating.
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SilverInkblot Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you :heart:
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vespera Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
oh :heart: and the title, perfect!
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SilverInkblot Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you :)
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aFteRLifeR Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2013
I almost smell the oranges.. well done.
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SilverInkblot Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you :)
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dreamsinstatic Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2013
Your fantastic work has been featured in Friday Night Features.
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SilverInkblot Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!
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FuzzyHoser Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Gorgeous imagery. :heart:
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SilverInkblot Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you :D
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FuzzyHoser Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Welcomes! (:
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lombregrise Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2013  Professional Writer
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SilverInkblot Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:bow:
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Lacewinged-Beauty Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2013   Writer
This is such a quirky thought! :heart:
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SilverInkblot Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks :)
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Lacewinged-Beauty Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2013   Writer
You're welcome!
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Austori Featured By Owner May 31, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
love the image :-D
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SilverInkblot Featured By Owner May 31, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks :)
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VFreie Featured By Owner May 28, 2013
Can't really say anything more than that I just love this image, and the orange sunset-lit impressionist picture it creates in my mind.
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SilverInkblot Featured By Owner May 28, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you :) I'm surprised by well this one has gone over. I didn't think that much of it at the time.
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DrippingWords Featured By Owner May 26, 2013  Student Writer
Wow, this is just amazing.
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SilverInkblot Featured By Owner May 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks :D
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DrippingWords Featured By Owner May 26, 2013  Student Writer
You're welcome!

Oh, btw. Do you mind me using you for MMM?
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SilverInkblot Featured By Owner May 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
=TwilightPoetess has already done one with me, so no :XD: I'm flattered :D
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DrippingWords Featured By Owner May 26, 2013  Student Writer
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GDeyke Featured By Owner May 26, 2013   Writer
I love this too - wonderful image.
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SilverInkblot Featured By Owner May 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you :heart:
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TwilightPoetess Featured By Owner May 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
LOVE this one. :heart:
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SilverInkblot Featured By Owner May 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks :D
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