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You exist in the
space where beautiful is a
question unanswered.
#Glory-Be-Project Day 35 and #NaHaiWriMo Day 4

I hate the titles can't have quotation marks. Otherwise, I probably would have titled it The "if" in beautiful. Which title do you like more?
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Tyrison Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2013  Student Writer
Hmm. I like what you've done with the title - it explain the rest. Not that it matters this much later, but I do like the parenthesis better.
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SilverInkblot Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you. I've come to like the parenthesis more myself.
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Tyrison Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2013  Student Writer
=D
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DangoLovesYou Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2013  Student Writer
I may well develop and addiction to these.

I try not to give a lot of 5/5's, but you make it hard not to. For something so simple, you've done a very inspiring job. I like the title the way it is. It's sort of mysterious, in a way, with subtle ambiguity. The poem itself is graceful and inspiring. Referring to the reader was an interesting choice, but I think it works well in adding power to the words. The simplicity, once again, does wonders in not distracting from the points, which are poetic enough within themselves. It's direct, it's simple, it's truthful, and I love it. Once again, 5/5.
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SilverInkblot Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I think I've come to like this title more than my alternative actually. It lets the reader puzzle out the meaning of the title by reading the actual content :D
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asecretoutlet Featured By Owner May 25, 2013
I love this- uncertainty is one of my favorite elements of a work of literature and it always frustrates me that I instinctively want to explain something as clearly as possible. Anyway, this really stood out to me. Love it :)
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SilverInkblot Featured By Owner May 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Believe me, clarity in my work is important to me. Perhaps more so than some because I don't always write linearly. Thank you for the fave!
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asecretoutlet Featured By Owner May 25, 2013
Same here- sometimes I wish it wasn't because my favorite poems to read are the subtle ones with unexplained allusions and ambiguous metaphors, they feel so special (as long as the poem altogether isn't too ambiguous- that's a different story lol) but I can't pull it off myself.
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word-s-myth Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2013  Professional Writer
It's very well done and so intriguing!
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SilverInkblot Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!
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