I try not to give a lot of 5/5's, but you make it hard not to. For something so simple, you've done a very inspiring job. I like the title the way it is. It's sort of mysterious, in a way, with subtle ambiguity. The poem itself is graceful and inspiring. Referring to the reader was an interesting choice, but I think it works well in adding power to the words. The simplicity, once again, does wonders in not distracting from the points, which are poetic enough within themselves. It's direct, it's simple, it's truthful, and I love it. Once again, 5/5.
I love this- uncertainty is one of my favorite elements of a work of literature and it always frustrates me that I instinctively want to explain something as clearly as possible. Anyway, this really stood out to me. Love it
Same here- sometimes I wish it wasn't because my favorite poems to read are the subtle ones with unexplained allusions and ambiguous metaphors, they feel so special (as long as the poem altogether isn't too ambiguous- that's a different story lol) but I can't pull it off myself.